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exploration of entirety

by skaskowski

Member since 2001 · Posted 31 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

tree shadows paint portraits, dancing dillemas on silhouetted surfaces. finite whisps and winters flake like cinder from december. animated vines and veins pulse purple in a perfect pitch. seismic shifts, sandy sickness. summer stapled, serpent disabled. a frigid foray into the dim dismal downpour.

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4 comments

[8] richa 31-Oct-03/6:32 AM Reply
I think the alliteration loses its power as it is overdone.

Stapled/disabled rhyme sounds a bit odd.

I like the second verse, and the third verse (although v3 took a few rereads).

Yep overall pretty good, lively.
[5] poetandknowit 31-Oct-03/8:49 AM Reply
You write like Richa, except in this case you make more sense.
[9] horus8 31-Oct-03/1:02 PM Reply
An umbrella is needed for that type of ganglia exposure.
[6] Jill Stockinger 28-Dec-20/2:47 PM Reply
some good imagery