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Steal my heart (Free verse) by baby_d

It was love a first sight. And try as I might, I could'nt find a way to get you off my mind. You've stolen my heart, and given me a new start. I just want you to know that as far as our love grows please treat my heart with care. Be fair, don't break my heart by wanting to be apart. Because I'm in love with You and I feel everything You do. You've stolen my heart so please be smart.

sliver 9-Nov-03/4:46 PM
It does sound kinda pimple. Try to expand your mind when writing about love, it's too easy to sound cliche(At least that's what they say)




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