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Foolish (Free verse) by Katzclear
Speak to me
Show me that you're here
Hold me close
To let me know you're near
Don't dare let me see
what is my worst fear-
When you have pushed me away
And left me all alone here
Please call me foolish for my thoughts
I can't describe how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
I need to know you need me too
We've grown so close together
Hun I've lost all independence
But they say nothing lasts forever
So far you're the only one that listens
I've got so many problems with my life
Hide them, it's what I always do
But you see through it, know something isn't right
I fear how much I rely on you
Please call me foolish for my thoughts
I can't describe how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
I need to know you need me too
Please don't feel bad- Don't think I'm saying you're unable to be
trusted
It's my past experiences I've had- All my relationships have corrupted
Just show me that you're here- Don't give up on the first signal of my
doubt
I need help knowing you're sincere- need you to teach me what this is
all about
Please tell me I was foolish for my thoughts
I hope you know how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
Please let me know you need me too
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8443
Posted: November 1, 2003 12:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2003 12:58 PM PST
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