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Foolish (Free verse) by Katzclear
Speak to me Show me that you're here Hold me close To let me know you're near Don't dare let me see what is my worst fear- When you have pushed me away And left me all alone here Please call me foolish for my thoughts I can't describe how much I need you 'cause right now you're all I've got I need to know you need me too We've grown so close together Hun I've lost all independence But they say nothing lasts forever So far you're the only one that listens I've got so many problems with my life Hide them, it's what I always do But you see through it, know something isn't right I fear how much I rely on you Please call me foolish for my thoughts I can't describe how much I need you 'cause right now you're all I've got I need to know you need me too Please don't feel bad- Don't think I'm saying you're unable to be trusted It's my past experiences I've had- All my relationships have corrupted Just show me that you're here- Don't give up on the first signal of my doubt I need help knowing you're sincere- need you to teach me what this is all about Please tell me I was foolish for my thoughts I hope you know how much I need you 'cause right now you're all I've got Please let me know you need me too

Up the ladder: Labeled Retarded
Down the ladder: Leftout

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8446
Posted: November 1, 2003 12:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2003 12:58 PM PST
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[10] sliver @ 63.190.72.255 | 9-Nov-03/11:36 AM | Reply
Try not to need too much, it leaves you open to pain.
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