poemranker ::Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg

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Free verse № 99062

Suicide over the course of a lifetime

by GregDeEgg

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

This can't be real. I'm too bored to think. My head is gone. It's everywhere I want to be; a credit to my card. Oooo, Aaaaa, Bbbbb, So when the air gets too stuffy and the war gets too going, and where you went becomes where you're at in the world of these dimensions, Don't get left behind by the dirigible didgeridoo ------ grawlgrowblergrowmbliagrown Neurons fire a house burns down my head hurts I feel sedated and I want to sleep. Not to tire, but to be GONE for eternity in several seconds.

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3 comments

[1] Bobjim 27-Apr-04/5:10 AM Reply
Hang your head in shame. Actually no, crawl into a hole and die
[10] Stephen Robins 27-Apr-04/6:26 AM Reply
I was on the brink of buying a chocolate bar as an afternoon treat before I read this poem, it oso moved me that I decided I would rather give the value of my chocolate bar (26p) to a charity. I went on to the Christian Aid site which demanded a minimum donation of £15 a week, which duly signed up for. I had however forgotten that my mortgage payment was due to go out today as well and I only had enough money to pay the mortgage. Consequently, I have had my house repossed and am having tyo move in with Cliff Thornburn. Curiously enough I have always been a fan of Cliff and the chance to play snooker with him every night has so overwhelmed me with joy that I have just ejaculated into a stranger's mouth.

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[8] Shuushin 27-Apr-04/7:09 PM Reply
yep. U is crA-Z

There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff.