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Suicide over the course of a lifetime (Free verse) by GregDeEgg This can't be real. I'm too bored to think.
My head is gone. It's everywhere I want to be;
a credit to my card.
Oooo, Aaaaa, Bbbbb,
So when the air gets too stuffy
and the war gets too going,
and where you went becomes where you're at
in the world of these dimensions,
Don't get left behind by the
dirigible didgeridoo ------
grawlgrowblergrowmbliagrown
Neurons fire
a house burns down
my head hurts
I feel sedated
and I want to sleep.
Not to tire, but to be
GONE for eternity
in several seconds.
Up the ladder:
Sublime
Down the ladder:
no no no bad move
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Posted: April 27, 2004 2:27 AM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2004 2:27 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8440 Comments:
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Bobjim @ 212.135.1.53
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27-Apr-04/5:10 AM
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Hang your head in shame. Actually no, crawl into a hole and die
I was on the brink of buying a chocolate bar as an afternoon treat before I read this poem, it oso moved me that I decided I would rather give the value of my chocolate bar (26p) to a charity. I went on to the Christian Aid site which demanded a minimum donation of £15 a week, which duly signed up for. I had however forgotten that my mortgage payment was due to go out today as well and I only had enough money to pay the mortgage. Consequently, I have had my house repossed and am having tyo move in with Cliff Thornburn. Curiously enough I have always been a fan of Cliff and the chance to play snooker with him every night has so overwhelmed me with joy that I have just ejaculated into a stranger's mouth.
Thanks -10-
yep. U is crA-Z
There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff. 172 view(s)
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