Why...?

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Nov 2003 · 5 comments

Standing at the waters edge I feel the energy flow threw my body Getting ready to ride It is like the vib of music Flowing threw my ears The anticipation of waiting for a good wave Is exzhilerating I know it will come 'I have to wait' Boarding down the face As it dies out And I am thrown off By the power of the rip curl My board is snaped in half It feels as if someone just broke my heart I want crumble to pieces Because I just lost my passion

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5 comments

[7] richa 9-Nov-03/11:14 AM Reply

Through not threw and snapped not snaped.

Could be sheared of redundancies like 'I have to wait'.

Other than that a good effort

[4] sliver 9-Nov-03/11:16 AM Reply

Start saving so yew ken by a knew bord

[8] Freethinker1602 9-Nov-03/11:52 AM Reply

KUDOS!!! :)

[1] horus8 10-Nov-03/1:48 AM Reply

Please do, but not in front of me. I'm not wearing shoes.

[7] 7!3 10-Aug-05/6:10 AM Reply

haha i like it.... and i mean the spelling mistakes, too!