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Dan (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom Was never able to understand...... that man Dan,
Didn't like him at all.... In fact, I hated his damned plan,
Until the day.... I walked in his shoes,
Life hit me with.... it's shit-quiverin blues,
Since then.... I have become Dan's fan!
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Posted: July 23, 2004 3:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2004 4:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.7222223 Overall Rank: 1885 Comments:
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Dear Chasz:
Good man! Doug
Yet another vast plethora of ellipses... as always your work bears the hallmark of "unbelievable talent" -10-
Dear Dark Angel:
Thank you again. Your Friend, Doug
i liked this, i love the whole dot thing, the "dan" "fan" "plan" thing, the whole trying to describe going beyond self, that's always positive.
Thanks!
Is this about Daniel, who went into the lion's cage but lived?
pretty good if u say so myself
but u could cut down on the cussing check out one of my poems-- HANGING or THERES A VIOCE DEEP INSIDE MY HEAD
Faggery of the highest possible level.
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Great...... I am very pleased to find that you, just as I, have
developed a fondness for "that man Dan."
Love, Doug
Yes, I do believe that we are. You see....... In the beginning God created The...... Oh, I'm sorry....I got off onto the wrong "In the beginning"...... please excuse me..... A "senior moment," I suppose.... Uh..... Uh..... You see, in the beginning.... Uh.... that damn man Dan was a male.... However, he had a high degree of "inner (perhaps genetic) "female features," consequently he decided to have an operation..... a sexual transformation type operation..... Thus that damn man Dan became "a dame." So as you can see...... I do believe that (at least essentially speaking) we are,"in fact," talking about "The Same Dame Dan!"
Love, Doug
Rather than asking, In what way do I walk in his shoes........... you might ask "How is it that I can walk in that man Dan's shoes"...... And, of, course, the answer is.... VERY CAREFULLY INDEED!"
Love, Doug