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Dan (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom

Was never able to understand...... that man Dan, Didn't like him at all.... In fact, I hated his damned plan, Until the day.... I walked in his shoes, Life hit me with.... it's shit-quiverin blues, Since then.... I have become Dan's fan!

cat 2-Aug-04/11:30 PM
i liked this, i love the whole dot thing, the "dan" "fan" "plan" thing, the whole trying to describe going beyond self, that's always positive.




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