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Why...? (Free verse) by muffielouise

Standing at the waters edge I feel the energy flow threw my body Getting ready to ride It is like the vib of music Flowing threw my ears The anticipation of waiting for a good wave Is exzhilerating I know it will come 'I have to wait' Boarding down the face As it dies out And I am thrown off By the power of the rip curl My board is snaped in half It feels as if someone just broke my heart I want crumble to pieces Because I just lost my passion

richa 9-Nov-03/11:14 AM
Through not threw and snapped not snaped.

Could be sheared of redundancies like 'I have to wait'.

Other than that a good effort




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