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Free reign (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Let me be
a horse
Let me from this stable
of redundancy
to run-
mane combing the wind.
Let me shun
the ground thorns that slow.
Zig, zag, jump chasms
because I can.
Let me decide direction
by what life
passes my nostrils.
Let the sun and moon dictate
my heart life-
let one day run into the next.
Let me be your horse.
Not to help you plow,
or pull your cart,
but to help you forward.
Nudge you, when needed.
Walk with you to calm away
the freeze-burned day.
If you need, lie next to my
body heat just for the night.
I'm always
just over that ridge,
and I can run.
Let me be
(my)horse.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.571429
Weighted score: 6.5431647
Overall Rank: 658
Posted: November 9, 2003 7:26 AM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2003 7:26 AM PST
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