I'll Take You In My Arms

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

Never again shall you yearn for love Nor pray for an angel sent from above For angels take no certain form So I'll take you in my arms To keep you safe and warm. . . . All of the pain in you Will fade away and awaken you If only you'll let me in And I'll take you in my arms So that you'll never weep again. . . . Please know that I'll love you for all time For loving a person is not a crime I only dream of you at home That I'll take you in my arms So never again will you be alone. . . . And if I were to hurt you You must know I'd never, ever mean to For the thought alone would destroy my soul And I'd take you in my arms . . . no more

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[10] baby_d 8-Nov-03/10:30 PM Reply

This is a real touching poem. I really like it. It remids me of something my boyfriend writes to me now and then. I loved it.

[9] sliver 9-Nov-03/9:53 AM Reply

Touching. BTW, I love cars too

[n/a] Tintagiles 6-Oct-04/5:59 PM Reply

Mediocrity Code: 8174F121

[10] arduinn 7-Oct-04/3:07 AM Reply

This is very nice.. Don't change anything.