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No one's Victory (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Tonight was just the beginning of another hash dream
Laced in games of skill/word/style
Dawn and rain our only masters
We played it wrong but got it right
You called it close, leaving me for the kill
Buzzards circling overhead tactics got some revision
Just to show errors in decisions I used real life depictions
Broken mirror glass shattered across the floor
Improving both my guile and candor
Dancing with my waltzing tongue becoming grander and grander
Teeth clenched to hold my dizzy beautiful voice inside my head
The girls both kissed me on the cheek, before stealing my tomorrow
Before tomorrow stole itself, favors owed cashed in
Making tonight's victor, no one
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3363
Posted: May 28, 2005 3:12 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2005 3:12 AM PDT
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