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unsung love (Ode) by khuscen night turns into morn
around us the world has grown
some dies and some are born
yet my love for you is still not shown
sitting straight in my throne
i stare at you until you are gone
leaving me all alone
my love for you unknown
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Posted: November 6, 2003 12:05 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 12:05 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2395 Comments:
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khuscen @ 131.172.4.44
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6-Nov-03/12:06 PM
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this girl broke my heart . . .
This is a wonderfull tribute to a dung beetles favourite task. Rolling poop.
Shams loves you you know.
I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.
VeRy ImOrTiOnAl
(some die, not dies)
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