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unsung love (Ode) by khuscen
night turns into morn around us the world has grown some dies and some are born yet my love for you is still not shown sitting straight in my throne i stare at you until you are gone leaving me all alone my love for you unknown

Up the ladder: Cancer
Down the ladder: He Hunts For Meaning

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2407
Posted: November 6, 2003 12:05 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 12:05 PM PST
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[n/a] khuscen @ 131.172.4.44 | 6-Nov-03/12:06 PM | Reply
this girl broke my heart . . .
[0] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 6-Nov-03/1:26 PM | Reply
This is a wonderfull tribute to a dung beetles favourite task. Rolling poop.
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 6-Nov-03/2:53 PM | Reply
Shams loves you you know.
[7] sliver @ 63.189.16.35 | 6-Nov-03/4:41 PM | Reply
I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.
[10] deleted user @ 211.24.241.13 | 7-Nov-03/10:09 PM | Reply
VeRy ImOrTiOnAl
[5] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 28-Dec-20/2:05 PM | Reply
(some die, not dies)
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