| Re: a comment on Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer |
7-Jun-04/8:54 PM |
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That would be mine. And what was wrong with my worm?
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| Re: a comment on A life unsure by sliver |
7-Jun-04/8:41 PM |
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Thanks, I felt a change was in order.
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| Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
7-Jun-04/8:40 PM |
We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature.
And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.
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| Re: Writers' Block by wilco |
7-Jun-04/8:31 PM |
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Must've been hard to think up this one.
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| Re: One Week Ago by Miggy |
7-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
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I could see this on the radio, Not that it's all that great(No offense), but it's better than alot of stuff I hear.
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| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
6-Jun-04/8:09 PM |
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| Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco |
6-Jun-04/7:55 PM |
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Sloppy what? Nothing I saw....10,10.
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| Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
6-Jun-04/7:51 PM |
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I'm looking forward to reading obituary to the moon. That makes it hrd to speak on this piece. I see that you are a musician. read a few af mine and let me know if I have any hope as a lyricist?
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| Re: Desire by mk32 |
2-Jun-04/9:18 PM |
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SHIT, I think this is going on my favorite list. Thanks.
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| Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu |
2-Jun-04/9:12 PM |
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This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
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| Re: a comment on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/9:05 PM |
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Perhaps you will have one of your own someday. Myself, I can't wait.
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| Re: a comment on Its raining by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/9:04 PM |
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Come on, it couldn't have been that bad.
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| Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
2-Jun-04/8:55 PM |
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| Re: Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear |
2-Jun-04/8:48 PM |
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Good imagery,I think tadpole refers to baptism. When ya gonna submit some more?
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| Re: The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:31 PM |
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Funny how children can make you completely reconsider your idea of life huh? 10
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| Re: a comment on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
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Too bad your mother didn't use birth control, then every poem I have wouldn't have zero's from Hoarus, Baby yoga, Jerimiah handfloss, etc. It's nice how all ten of your personalities are all full of shit.
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| Re: a comment on Its raining by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:25 PM |
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Can't remember it, I'm sure it was just me saying something nice. By the way, it's sliver, not silver.
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| Re: Know Me by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:22 PM |
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I shall comment caitydee, A nice piece. I hope it worked out.10
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| Re: Sisters of mercy by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/3:26 PM |
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They walked as if robotic? seems to fit better.
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| Re: The Trainspotter by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/3:23 PM |
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I guess my life isn't that boring then.
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