Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT	2-Jun-04/3:21 PM
My new favorite. Ten does not begin. I especially like the scroll of life. If you are speaking to God, then your and thee should be capitalized. Fantastic writing.
Re: The Angel and The Ass by pain killer	2-Jun-04/3:16 PM
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh? Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
Re: The Red Basket by pain killer	2-Jun-04/3:12 PM
How can she be lonely with all these emotional chickens about?
Re: Heaven Out Here by wilco	2-Jun-04/3:08 PM
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently. 10
Re: Voices Within by DJCopasetic	30-May-04/6:49 AM
Yep.
Re: My first Haiku by DJCopasetic	30-May-04/6:48 AM
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
Re: you by killingjuliet	30-May-04/6:47 AM
This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
Re: lost in the riptide by killingjuliet	30-May-04/6:44 AM
I couldn't seem to find the flow.
Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet	30-May-04/6:43 AM
I return your 6.
Re: screaming in silence by siyado	24-May-04/9:15 PM
Great! I love it. Especially the way you closed it.
Re: am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker	24-May-04/9:12 PM
I do like the imagery though, especially the foam spraying. 8
Re: Only I wish I could say.. by PunkyPanda	24-May-04/9:10 PM
the third stanza is um, no bueno, si? other than that, probably a 6 or 7.
Re: and you by edwardo	24-May-04/9:07 PM
What?
Re: leavetaking by daniella	24-May-04/5:04 PM
Well said.
Re: Bed by gilded in gold	21-May-04/12:31 PM
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17	20-May-04/12:55 PM
Remind me not to piss you off, or teach you how to load black powder.
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold	20-May-04/12:53 PM
All moments are painted I think, you just can't always distinguish the colors. I like this, let's see some more?
Re: Faggots get what they deserve! by J.B. Manning	16-May-04/7:53 PM
HOMOPHOBIC, aren't we all. I couldn't stop laughing!!! A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee. I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
Re: No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness by Prince of Void	16-May-04/7:41 PM
Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.
Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT	14-May-04/11:41 AM
What about the gay snakes? you left out the gay snakes!