on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT
2 Jun 2004, 3:21 PM
My new favorite. Ten does not begin. I especially like the scroll of life. If you are speaking to God, then your and thee should be capitalized. Fantastic writing.
on The Angel and The Ass by pain killer
2 Jun 2004, 3:16 PM
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh?
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
on The Red Basket by pain killer
2 Jun 2004, 3:12 PM
How can she be lonely with all these emotional chickens about?
on Heaven Out Here by wilco
2 Jun 2004, 3:08 PM
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently.
10
10
on Voices Within by DJCopasetic
30 May 2004, 6:49 AM
Yep.
on My first Haiku by DJCopasetic
30 May 2004, 6:48 AM
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
on you by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:47 AM
This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
on lost in the riptide by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:44 AM
I couldn't seem to find the flow.
on dancing on air by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:43 AM
I return your 6.
on screaming in silence by siyado
24 May 2004, 9:15 PM
Great! I love it. Especially the way you closed it.
on am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker
24 May 2004, 9:12 PM
I do like the imagery though, especially the foam spraying. 8
on Only I wish I could say.. by PunkyPanda
24 May 2004, 9:10 PM
the third stanza is um, no bueno, si? other than that, probably a 6 or 7.
on leavetaking by daniella
24 May 2004, 5:04 PM
Well said.
on Bed by gilded in gold
21 May 2004, 12:31 PM
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
on Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17
20 May 2004, 12:55 PM
Remind me not to piss you off, or teach you how to load black powder.
on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 12:53 PM
All moments are painted I think, you just can't always distinguish the colors. I like this, let's see some more?
on Faggots get what they deserve! by J.B. Manning
16 May 2004, 7:53 PM
HOMOPHOBIC, aren't we all. I couldn't stop laughing!!!
A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee.
I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee.
I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
on No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness by Prince of Void
16 May 2004, 7:41 PM
Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.
on Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT
14 May 2004, 11:41 AM
What about the gay snakes? you left out the gay snakes!