| Re: The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/5:24 AM |
You ARE prepared. Yup put label back on. Then "acquire" a ride!
Descriptive warm fuzzies abound.9
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
25-Sep-02/5:18 AM |
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Never got to go to a big college like you blokes. Maybe I'm better for it. Who knows. I should read some cromwell. Ireland has been calling me for years.(i'dbetter go soon) Ports are heavy but go well with tiramisu. I like parrano myself. Great content good beat.8
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| Re: You don't know me by toredikt |
25-Sep-02/5:08 AM |
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Yes, yes. s-4,L6 lose the"a". 8
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| Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart |
24-Sep-02/5:58 PM |
Work on your spelling a little. Work downpage a little too, please.
Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8
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| Re: We Poor Rise by Wulf |
24-Sep-02/4:50 PM |
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Screw flow! CONTENT CONTENT CONTENT! 9
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| Re: a comment on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 |
24-Sep-02/4:19 PM |
I don't know if I'm gonna get more from the poetry side of this forum, or the humor side. But I definitely agree with the patterns statement. RULES!?? WE DON'T NEED NO STINKING RULES!!!!
HAIKUUUUUUS AWAY!!!!
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| Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 |
24-Sep-02/1:31 PM |
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I smell an affair, but I don't understand the mechanics of Haiku.8 Can someone break Haiku down for me?I'd like to try one on for size.
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| Re: Taffy by knickytoy |
24-Sep-02/1:00 PM |
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Nice depth without losing the reader. Personally,leave it alone.8
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| Re: Since The Fall by harrytuttle |
24-Sep-02/12:57 PM |
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Business relationship gone sour? Cool though.7
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| Re: a comment on Morning conflict by INTRANSIT |
24-Sep-02/12:46 PM |
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Thank you one! Thank you all! I am understood and I know what I'm looking for. See you all in 5 with more:)
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| Re: Wind Elemental by DreamMachine |
24-Sep-02/5:32 AM |
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Is the writer high on something? Or are they wishing they were elsewhere.Either way good.9
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| Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer |
24-Sep-02/5:24 AM |
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I tire of pain and misery so I read pieces too fast. I missed the (he) and therefore missed the triangle. But a fascinating view!8
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| Re: happy hour by Limness |
24-Sep-02/5:14 AM |
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Well, so much for writing about the 9-5 crowd. Covered it better than I might've.9
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| Re: a comment on Married by INTRANSIT |
23-Sep-02/9:31 PM |
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| Re: When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes |
23-Sep-02/9:28 PM |
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You are deeper than I. What is wrong with this system?!!! Iknow I scored you a 7!!!!
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| Re: a comment on Married by INTRANSIT |
23-Sep-02/9:24 PM |
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OK I think you hit the mark. Maybe I should have said "tether with love". Yes? No? Throw it out the dou?
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| Re: a comment on Married by INTRANSIT |
23-Sep-02/8:44 PM |
OUCH! I thought it had plenty of depth. Was I too vague maybe?
'Course I can't please every one. Thanks for the input:)
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| Re: a comment on Married by INTRANSIT |
23-Sep-02/6:51 PM |
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Yeah, I'm a sucker for simplicity, and romance. I guess we cant help who we are, right?
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| Re: Broken Tomarrow by DreamMachine |
23-Sep-02/6:37 PM |
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POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
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| Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner |
23-Sep-02/3:50 PM |
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Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7
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