Ode № 16877

Since The Fall

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

I'm wond'ring now A year's gone by Could it have been so long ago? It seems like only yesterday I'm hunkered down I'm looking up The danger looms like thunderheads What lies ahead? Everything's changed And everything is still the same Are we united one to one? We tread on thin ice everyday But still go bowling, still play golf Nothing is changed Everything's changed

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5 comments

[7] vulcan 24-Sep-02/8:21 AM Reply

I like it 7.

[7] god'swife 24-Sep-02/8:28 AM Reply

L12 & 13 could be a poem on there own, Good. the last 2 lines are over used. I think the poem would do better without them.

[n/a] harrytuttle › god'swife 24-Sep-02/10:38 AM Reply

Actually, the redundance is deliberate. I looked at it without them and it isn't the same poem (to me).

[7] INTRANSIT 24-Sep-02/12:57 PM Reply

Business relationship gone sour? Cool though.7

[n/a] Tibbs 26-Sep-02/12:01 AM Reply

My goldfish grew an inch.