| Re: Just For Today by apples_tim |
27-Sep-02/4:22 AM |
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Simply put. I can dig it.9
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| Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones |
27-Sep-02/4:17 AM |
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If more people would "jump in after themselves",they'd be a lot happier. Bravo.
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| Re: Transfixed (#2) by Christof |
27-Sep-02/4:08 AM |
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Since I've been on this site I've gotten better at studying others' work.This is really good. ditto.
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| Re: RunOnSentence by harrytuttle |
27-Sep-02/4:01 AM |
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I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9
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| Re: Deaf by sav876 |
26-Sep-02/1:24 PM |
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Hope you're not really deaf. Last line hit full throttle.Liked it!9
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| Re: that time my friend slipped me a speedball by unknown |
26-Sep-02/1:21 PM |
Is your friend polish? Hilarious!9
Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
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| Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom |
26-Sep-02/12:51 PM |
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DO YOU MIND?!!!!! I'm trying to enjoy my last hunnert or so minutes before I have to leave.....
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| Re: American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE |
26-Sep-02/9:47 AM |
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| Re: Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom |
26-Sep-02/9:45 AM |
What would happen if you changed the last line to "trick"? Too fun!
Glad not every one is so serious.
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| Re: #16 by mikejedw |
26-Sep-02/9:41 AM |
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I like it? What the hell did NJ say? OH, I got it.
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| Re: Nocturne by w~* ATHENA *~w |
26-Sep-02/5:19 AM |
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| Re: Fraternity by Christof |
26-Sep-02/5:15 AM |
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Thats funny! I really was feeling a war. Then that door-thing spun me good. Fun. I see the pattern too.Thanks for teaching me.
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
25-Sep-02/8:45 PM |
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Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
25-Sep-02/7:10 PM |
I hope you get to this comment.
I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.
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| Re: WHY by adrenalize |
25-Sep-02/7:03 PM |
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Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7
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| Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart |
25-Sep-02/4:48 PM |
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Yes, line breaks. Another good topic. Take heart, you're not like them if you're asking "why". Keep trying but...BREATHE!
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| Re: Rescue 911 by searching |
25-Sep-02/3:23 PM |
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Imagine all the pain and suffering that will dissipate when people listen to their own hearts instead of"society". Ifind no flaws.10
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| Re: 5 p.m. by cobalt |
25-Sep-02/3:19 PM |
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Be glad you dont have a CB to listen to everyones unintelligible droning whilst stuck. I like orange soda.8 Only 'cause I'm still learning.
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| Re: myself by decadentlaurel |
25-Sep-02/5:31 AM |
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The openness is what makes this work for me.7 Know this: Only you can set yoursel free!
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| Re: WLPAN by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/5:27 AM |
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Blew my wad on your other poem, liked this one too.8
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