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that time my friend slipped me a speedball (Haiku) by balthazar
the room is rounded. a wash of white wall whooshing. i'm in the corner.

Up the ladder: ?
Down the ladder: I am free

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0833335
Weighted score: 5.7919803
Overall Rank: 1708
Posted: September 26, 2002 8:35 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 8:35 AM PDT
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[7] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 | 26-Sep-02/8:50 AM | Reply
Now that's lost! Funny.
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 26-Sep-02/9:24 AM | Reply
why did it take so long for this to sink in? i need a nap, i guess. either that or a speedball.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 26-Sep-02/1:21 PM | Reply
Is your friend polish? Hilarious!9
Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
[9] hipster flare @ 209.68.64.69 | 8-Jan-03/9:32 AM | Reply
FanTAStic alliteration.
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