Free verse № 19099

I am free

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2002 · 6 comments

I am free From the vile misconceptions I am loose To the tightness of my thoughts I am high Above the clouds gaze I am singing In my torn up heart I am gaining Though I am loosing much I am aware That its only temporary I am scared Even though I am brave I am confused Still I know what to do I sit here But in my mind Im a thousand miles away

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6 comments

[7] Reuben Spiteri 7-Oct-02/10:53 PM Reply

good one !!
stay there...

[n/a] blueclouds › Reuben Spiteri 21-Oct-02/11:28 AM Reply

thank you

[0] Tintagiles 19-Oct-02/6:25 PM Reply

I am yawning

[n/a] blueclouds › Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/11:29 AM Reply

Then face the other direction please..

[n/a] horus8 22-Jan-03/7:19 PM Reply

you were fresh even though you stunk.

[8] deleted user 28-Jan-04/12:47 PM Reply

i like this....its good