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I am free (Free verse) by blueclouds
I am free From the vile misconceptions I am loose To the tightness of my thoughts I am high Above the clouds gaze I am singing In my torn up heart I am gaining Though I am loosing much I am aware That its only temporary I am scared Even though I am brave I am confused Still I know what to do I sit here But in my mind Im a thousand miles away
Down the ladder: i am on the carpet
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0833335
Weighted score: 5.7919803
Overall Rank: 1709
Posted: October 7, 2002 2:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 2:19 PM PDT
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[7] Reuben Spiteri @ 203.121.131.33 | 7-Oct-02/10:53 PM | Reply
good one !!
stay there...
[n/a] blueclouds @ 65.114.71.4 > Reuben Spiteri | 21-Oct-02/11:28 AM | Reply
thank you
[0] Tintagiles @ 207.179.185.160 | 19-Oct-02/6:25 PM | Reply
I am yawning
[n/a] blueclouds @ 65.114.71.4 > Tintagiles | 21-Oct-02/11:29 AM | Reply
Then face the other direction please..
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jan-03/7:19 PM | Reply
you were fresh even though you stunk.
[8] deleted user @ 208.25.247.97 | 28-Jan-04/12:47 PM | Reply
i like this....its good
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