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I am free (Free verse) by blueclouds

I am free From the vile misconceptions I am loose To the tightness of my thoughts I am high Above the clouds gaze I am singing In my torn up heart I am gaining Though I am loosing much I am aware That its only temporary I am scared Even though I am brave I am confused Still I know what to do I sit here But in my mind Im a thousand miles away

Santeria 28-Jan-04/12:47 PM
i like this....its good




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