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WHY (Free verse) by adrenalize
WHY Why do people fall for that thing called love If they are destined to drift away Why do you put on that ???still be friends??? act When we know it???ll never be anything like that Why do I want to believe there???s one light burning When reality tells me it???s the end of the road for us Why does silence take over Just before a storm is about to break Why does it take a lifetime To find someone you love Why does it take just one moment To lose them forever Why do we think we are invincible When we are just human beings Why do we think it???s going to happen to someone else When it???s so close and yet seems so far Why does the State of love and trust Take an eternity to build Why does that State turn to dust Just when you realize its there Why cant u look at me When you say you don???t love me anymore And why does it hurt so bad When I know a part of me will always belong to you

Up the ladder: Suffocating
Down the ladder: Not Again

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.5965877
Overall Rank: 12531
Posted: September 25, 2002 9:17 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2002 9:17 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 25-Sep-02/7:03 PM | Reply
Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7
[n/a] adrenalize @ 202.141.238.2 > INTRANSIT | 26-Sep-02/5:55 AM | Reply
yeah i think def leppard is a gr8 band contrary to what the charts and so called mainstream music gurus have to say
[6] Tibbs @ 67.84.171.10 | 25-Sep-02/10:53 PM | Reply
Because you'd rather cling to something imagined than move on and make a future? Really people. Is this the bleeding hearts club?
[n/a] adrenalize @ 202.141.238.2 > Tibbs | 26-Sep-02/5:56 AM | Reply
Sorry u think that way...........just my experiences thats all
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