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Not Again (Lyric) by Brennan Fall
Fuck it all
There is no death
There is no life
When angels drown in pools of hate
To find in time there is no fate
I cry to try
The rain is washed away
Clocks that lie
There is no time
All this shit that goes around
A brief reflection
Lets the mirror hit the ground
Some dreams better left unsaid
You close your eyes
Don't compromise
What truth remains lies bleeding there
You try to turn your back
But your heart can only stare
Up the ladder:
WHY
Down the ladder:
ode to zzinnia
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Posted: September 30, 2002 10:26 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 10:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5965877 Overall Rank: 12532 Comments:
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1-Oct-02/12:23 AM
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I was always one who approved of swearing in poetry. Vulgarity can also be beautiful. It's kind of vague though, you might wanna specify the kind of shit you're frustrated with. :o)
Good poem
thats some bitter stuff.....i like it tho..
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