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Not Again (Lyric) by Brennan

Fall Fuck it all There is no death There is no life When angels drown in pools of hate To find in time there is no fate I cry to try The rain is washed away Clocks that lie There is no time All this shit that goes around A brief reflection Lets the mirror hit the ground Some dreams better left unsaid You close your eyes Don't compromise What truth remains lies bleeding there You try to turn your back But your heart can only stare

Owner of the Sky 1-Oct-02/12:23 AM
I was always one who approved of swearing in poetry. Vulgarity can also be beautiful. It's kind of vague though, you might wanna specify the kind of shit you're frustrated with. :o)




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