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The Writing Life #2 (Haiku) by poetandknowit mail woman arrives
rush to the door just to say
thank you, and hello.
Up the ladder:
Blood Plush
Down the ladder:
Loosed
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Posted: September 25, 2002 7:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2002 7:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2381434 Overall Rank: 4148 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228
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25-Sep-02/8:45 PM
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Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?
Made me smile with this one. Thank you.
I like your poem. Speaking of mail, how would you like to receive a subscription to your favorite magazine? I'm selling them as a fund raiser for my school I need one more subscription by tommorrow to win a really big prize. what do you say? S.O.g
What does S.O.g. mean. And what magazines?
S.O.g means Spawn of god'swife aka Son of god'swife. He's desperate, he needs to sell one more magazine(you name it) to go on some decadent limo ride to the restuarant of his choice and then it's on to the arcade for hours of video games.
Utne Reader? How much?
6 issues for 15, 12 for 30. We also have weight -watchers.
I think she's calling you fat!
Not me, my son is exercising his humour.
Oh yes, her son called me Chicken Vomit Breath when I was half dead of fever last weekend and he marauded his mother's late night secrets and ransacked the site. No weight watchers. I am far from fat, sorry. Tell you son I am going to kick his ass!!! Now there is some testosterone. And then I am going to tell all his buddies at school that he sits down to go pee.
You're going to send him that $30 anyways, aren't you?
How do I pay? Freaking kid and a limo ride playing video games that rot his brain with the excuse of oh it will improve the hand eye coordination and he will be a baseball player for the dodgers. Will he really get this or is it a hoax? Will I get this magazine or am I sending you $30 so you can buy crack and cigarettes? I am a sucker that way. I have crack heads at my door at least twice a year with some cooked up story about needing a part for the car that I never see, and I let myself fall for it every time. God damn one legged, wheel chair bound no benefit vet on the corner of Colfax and York has made a killing off me.
Oh my God you make me happy I'll pay for the subscription, you can reinburse when you receive the first issue. I need your address city state zip. A bogus ph#, enless fo course you want telemarketers breaking the monotony. I'll post my e-mail and you can send the info to that. Leave your e-mail and I'll send you my address. Let me know when you picked up the e-mail address so I can delete it.
Hello, are we closing this deal or would you rather not? That's ok.
I was waiting for your e-mail.
got it, info is on the way.
Did you think if you said my poem sucked I would automatically write the sales pitch off. Someone keeps lowering their score. If they only knew the life, day after day, alone. No one to talk to; the highlight of the day is the freaking mail!! I am obsessed.
By the way dear Dr., there's a terrific website, www.todotango.com. I think you'd like it. They have a link to a few Argentine radio stations, the best of them being Radio Criolla. Play it and think of me. Sweet dreams, Caio.
Highly comic and no doubt true.
You must really enjoy being nasty to people, you are the reason I've deleted 10 of my poems from this site. I think I will just move my poems to poetry.com at least there I won't get insulted.
AMALEA: I was not being nasty. I was saying I'm sorry. I am reaaly not z or balth! I promise. Come back, please come back.
Hi, I'm back. NO more catfights or I promise you a verbal duel.
I agree with you... he is the exact same way to me as well... you should post on piptalk.com... they're really nice and they'll help out if you need. But, I think he enjoys bashing works so he will feel better about his own... oh and p&k, if you're reading this... not the best poem in the world bud..
8/10
patient, are we? :D
nothing personal, but I always belive that the word "just" is unnecessary in most writing. every word should count.
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