poemranker ::RunOnSentence by harrytuttle

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Free verse № 17506

RunOnSentence

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Best you tell me now what you are thinking Because time, that swiftest of horses, Runs like the wind And tramples me Before I can utter a syllable

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4 comments

[8] god'swife 26-Sep-02/7:41 PM Reply
Gorgeous. If I were you I'd try for something more novel then "Runs like the wind"
[9] INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/4:01 AM Reply
I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9
[9] INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/5:24 AM Reply
Damn, forgot the "other" box. Sorry dude.
[6] Mutant_X 29-Sep-02/4:56 PM Reply
it's a nice one