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RunOnSentence (Free verse) by harrytuttle Best you tell me now
what you are thinking
Because time, that swiftest of horses,
Runs like the wind
And tramples me
Before I can utter a syllable
Up the ladder:
it sounds like dying but tastes like living.
Down the ladder:
Devotion
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.181818
Posted: September 26, 2002 7:27 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 7:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.590909 Overall Rank: 2321 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.210.161
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26-Sep-02/7:41 PM
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Gorgeous. If I were you I'd try for something more novel then "Runs like the wind"
I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9
Damn, forgot the "other" box. Sorry dude.
it's a nice one
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