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RunOnSentence (Free verse) by harrytuttle

Best you tell me now what you are thinking Because time, that swiftest of horses, Runs like the wind And tramples me Before I can utter a syllable

INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/4:01 AM
I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9




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