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You don't know me (Free verse) by toredikt
I know more than you understand
I understand more than you think
So I don't need your advice
Whom are you to judge me?
You can't look into my mind,
You don't recognise the core of my spine
You don't even know my motivation for this rhyme
Who do you think you are,
Looking at my behaviour with astonished eyes
On what grounds do you claim to be right
Judging my movements with ludicrous lies
Don't think you know me
When everything I do
Catches you in a great surprise
As different as we are
You have no reasons what so ever
To judge my actions
So cruelly clever
Because wrong you are, in every sence
Forcing me to build a defence
Whatever I do
In my world that's the only reasonably thing to do
And the norms and values in this space
Are of no access to you
Acknowledge these words of truth
And accept the pain of ignorance
And with a peaceful spirit of youth;
Lets live our lives freely in whatever way you and I choose
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.1152606
Overall Rank: 5978
Posted: September 25, 2002 2:01 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2002 2:01 AM PDT
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