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Long Long Way To Go (Free verse) by adrenalize
Like the darkness that has no dawn The sound of silence that goes on Wondering if I am actually here Or if this is just another nightmare The look on your face says it all Never thought that I could ever fall You say u want to be free And I doubt whether we were ever meant to be I guess you finally saw the light Your ray of sunshine after the long, cold night Don???t know what to say The deafening silence as u begin to walk away Leaving your trail of tears behind Turns out true love really is blind Where my road takes me now I don???t know But I have a Long, Long Way to go Adrenalize

Up the ladder: 50 miles an hour
Down the ladder: You don't know me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.1152606
Overall Rank: 5975
Posted: September 17, 2002 8:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 8:00 AM PDT
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