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Free verse № 16761

Broken Tomarrow

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

A heart broken; today, Tomarrow; A sad day of loss, One; the loss of memory, Two; the loss of two children, Life's complications become more then three; they are Many, But when all seems lost; Forget not those misfortunes, For to them; You are not always thier cost, Of life, of love, and of liberty and trust, There are many boundries to life, Though they may seem to be broken; In shambles and unjust, They; Like your life, Make you learn to live some; Reguardless of your loss, Because within you; For you, Remember the ones you love, Cus they know for you that these boundries can be crossed

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[10] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/6:37 PM Reply
POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
[0] poetandknowit 22-Jan-03/1:15 PM Reply
Interesting spelling and use of grammar.