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Broken Tomarrow (Free verse) by DreamMachine
A heart broken; today, Tomarrow; A sad day of loss, One; the loss of memory, Two; the loss of two children, Life's complications become more then three; they are Many, But when all seems lost; Forget not those misfortunes, For to them; You are not always thier cost, Of life, of love, and of liberty and trust, There are many boundries to life, Though they may seem to be broken; In shambles and unjust, They; Like your life, Make you learn to live some; Reguardless of your loss, Because within you; For you, Remember the ones you love, Cus they know for you that these boundries can be crossed

Up the ladder: pragmatic bastard!
Down the ladder: Ghetto Symphony

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Weighted score: 4.654218
Overall Rank: 12280
Posted: September 23, 2002 6:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2002 6:24 PM PDT
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 23-Sep-02/6:37 PM | Reply
POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.56 | 22-Jan-03/1:15 PM | Reply
Interesting spelling and use of grammar.
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