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Broken Tomarrow (Free verse) by DreamMachine
A heart broken; today,
Tomarrow; A sad day of loss,
One; the loss of memory,
Two; the loss of two children,
Life's complications become more then three; they are Many,
But when all seems lost; Forget not those misfortunes,
For to them; You are not always thier cost,
Of life, of love, and of liberty and trust,
There are many boundries to life,
Though they may seem to be broken; In shambles and unjust,
They; Like your life,
Make you learn to live some; Reguardless of your loss,
Because within you; For you,
Remember the ones you love,
Cus they know for you that these boundries can be crossed
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Weighted score: 4.654218
Overall Rank: 12280
Posted: September 23, 2002 6:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2002 6:24 PM PDT
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