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Ode № 17049

The Nights Draw In

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Sep 2002 · 8 comments

Now that the season is almost upon us I sing a hymn of praise to the paraphernalia of winter The woollen thinsulate gloves and my University of St. Andrews scarf The thick Welsh quilted blanket that came from my grandmother's house after she died Gortex boots that will keep even Gower rain away from my delicate toes Waterproof trousers that are perfect for explorations into the hinterland The fleece-like hat I bought in Scotland because ten per cent of body heat is lost through the head The thermal socks meant for a hiking weekend that got cancelled and never happened The umbrella left by my old flatmate who couldn't be bothered carrying it home to Germany The jumpers I have acquired over the years from many places; my favourite is green and made of cotton The waterproof jacket from Buxton market that cost a tenner and says 'London Borough of Redbridge Car Park Attendant' As I rediscover these things in anticipation of the cold It is impossible not to give thanks of some kind

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8 comments

[8] Christof 25-Sep-02/3:55 AM Reply
Thanks especially for the car park attendant's jacket. This is a very warm poem despite the coldness of its subject.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones › Christof 25-Sep-02/3:58 AM Reply
Christof - I am impressed by the speed of your replies. Thank you for your positive comments. Incidentally, I really do possess the jacket in question, although I took off the label.
[8] Christof › Nicholas Jones 25-Sep-02/3:59 AM Reply
You should've left it on!
[n/a] Nicholas Jones › Christof 25-Sep-02/4:02 AM Reply
I realise that now. Perhaps I'll get out my sewing kit and reattach it.
[n/a] INTRANSIT 25-Sep-02/5:24 AM Reply
You ARE prepared. Yup put label back on. Then "acquire" a ride!
Descriptive warm fuzzies abound.9
[9] god'swife 25-Sep-02/7:32 AM Reply
I wish I could right as directly as you. You don't seem at all pretentious.
[8] Tibbs 25-Sep-02/11:48 PM Reply
Great. Really great evocation.
[7] Nicholas Monson 4-Dec-02/5:04 AM Reply
A lovely touch (again)