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HOW DO I WRITE (Lyric) by kawakurdi
You ask me: how do you write? Do the birds know How their wings and feathers grow? Does a baby realise How sleep seals his little eyes? And when the skies start to rain Do the droplets know their terrain? Do you know why the heart of the river swells When the sun between her arms dwells? I do not know how I write I do not know how the anguish of my pen Reaches the point of eruption, now and then. I swear by your sad-looking eyes The only thing I realise Is that my heart does not cease To suffer from an eternal disease Of which the words are only a symptom: It is the love of freedom! I do not know what sequence nebulous letters will take What shades of meaning will be born, what rust will break, Which phrases smile, what characters weep, what sounds ring, And what kind of melodies The nightingale of my heart will sing. The only thing I know is that my heart is full Of waves of immortal feelings, Of hopes and aspirations, which, I can tell, For the sake of my people And generations to come Will challenge the mountains of hell. I swear by your sad eyes I do not know How the cataracts of my feelings flow? The only thing I know for sure Is that deep, deep in my heart, subconscious, without knowledge, I worship the words of my native language.

Up the ladder: Missing You
Down the ladder: The Nights Draw In

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Weighted score: 5.618588
Overall Rank: 2220
Posted: July 30, 2002 3:23 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 3:23 PM PDT
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[4] Sigh'ense... @ 63.210.112.184 | 30-Jul-02/6:52 PM | Reply
"realise" is actually spelled "realize"...
just something I... noticed.
4 future referrence,

Da1
[9] molly @ 4.62.1.246 | 30-Jul-02/7:02 PM | Reply
actually, "realise" is the british variant of "realize," like "practise" to "practice."

i like this poem. it flows very well and probably the best out of all of yours...
[n/a] kawakurdi @ | 31-Jul-02/5:23 AM | Reply
Thanx for this expalanation. British English 's' is 'z' in American Englsih in many words: verbs and nouns. You gave examples. Another is
organis[z]ation.
Thanks for being so positive about the poem.
[6] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 31-Jul-02/6:50 AM | Reply
i like the idea very much, but i think the final stanza loses steam a bit. it's more...vernacular, maybe, than the images you paint in the rest of the poem
[7] ==Doylum @ 213.122.185.101 | 3-Aug-02/6:18 PM | Reply
Bloody a-mericans telling us how to use our own language, they'll be dictating of foreign policy next, and what we watch and hear.. .. oh hang on, oh
Like the poem though.
P.S Bushy Boy. Get yer hands of Filingdales i know what your up to and i don't much like it i can tell you, i may even write a really rather strong letter to the local newspaper about it. Nah shit can be bothered.
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