| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
2-Oct-02/7:02 AM |
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Goofball. Loved it. If you want, I'll score it. Just say so.
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| Re: Norman #86 by Owner of the Sky |
2-Oct-02/6:59 AM |
Good, I like it. It takes a couple of readings, that makes it better.
If you care(9. Hi K!
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| Re: Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit |
1-Oct-02/11:51 AM |
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I wish my wife spooned me like that! Forgive me if I take this at face value. No,wait... You are the roommate, the dead shape is the bed? I have to understand depth before I can write it. Yes?
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| Re: a comment on always the end to this good night by nentwined |
1-Oct-02/11:24 AM |
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Well, when duty calls..... I'm sending you a 55gal drum of 50/40/10 coffee/espresso/nitrous oxide. And some trucker-isms to keep you going. Keep'er between the lines, keep the left door shut, and HAMMER DOWN!
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| Re: Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman |
1-Oct-02/11:05 AM |
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Actually, I saw a sweeter side to this. Or maybe I should windex my minds eye.
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| Re: a comment on Fall from Love's Grace by loneshadow29 |
1-Oct-02/11:03 AM |
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I'd like to give you a hand too. When you're ready, look up my profile and e-mail me.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/5:57 AM |
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That is beautiful. A tear has fallen. Scale not big enough.
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| Re: a comment on Married by INTRANSIT |
1-Oct-02/5:52 AM |
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Thanks, you really felt this the way I did! Exactly, in fact. Ido see what they mean with the tether thing, but I cant bring myself to morph it. I'm afraid it will lose its (panache)?
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| Re: always the end to this good night by nentwined |
30-Sep-02/6:55 PM |
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Seriously, what's up with the sleep dep. dude. Dudette?
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| Re: Asthma by jessicazee |
30-Sep-02/6:52 PM |
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This has potential. Focus more on the breathing aspects and less on other junk. No score. work it.
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| Re: At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness |
30-Sep-02/6:41 PM |
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WOO HOO!!! Another motorhead! I prefer mine with four wheels but since I've moved from the Mile High to WI, I can really dig that cool Harley vibe. Ride on!!!!
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| Re: the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined |
30-Sep-02/5:44 PM |
OK, so you're not a kung fu master.
Or a haiku master for that matter.But, it's fun, take a friggin' nap will ya! And thanks for leaving my dumb ass on the site.You knew I'd be back didntcha?
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| Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky |
29-Sep-02/4:17 PM |
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| Re: Paysage Moralise by vulcan |
29-Sep-02/4:09 PM |
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Sorry I assumed latin. What a dumb-fuck eh?
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| Re: Gemini by susie |
29-Sep-02/8:46 AM |
My mom was a Gem. An alcoholic too.
This makes me smile and scares the bejeeezus out of me too. Kudos.8
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| Re: Paysage Moralise by vulcan |
29-Sep-02/8:43 AM |
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I really like this.9 Iwish I understood (latin) the title.
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| Re: Suicide III by disturbedone182 |
29-Sep-02/8:37 AM |
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I've seen a suicide. Guy shot himself with a .22 handgun. It's nothing more than sad and selfish. We owe you no apology either. BUT there's a rythm.2
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| Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle |
28-Sep-02/3:56 PM |
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AAW CHRIST! THATS FUNNY. I remember I was at a 7-11 in Colo and this lady was putting her daughter in the car when the little on held up a pack of Dolly Madisons and yelled DONUTS!
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| Re: I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9 |
28-Sep-02/3:53 PM |
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Shorten and add a little beef.Good rythm.8
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| Re: The Seagull Reader by SpiffyDoo |
28-Sep-02/3:43 PM |
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Of the three, this is the better I think. I think you can improve with future pieces. Welcome.9
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