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Norman #86 (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky
Dear Norman, How are things up There? And do you like the hair? I know I hate it too, Just as I know It bothers you. But that's not why I called, But why I put you on hold. I wanted to ask about Why we haven't taken out, The playful doubts; Or the ones long dead That you put in my head. Can I look in there, Now-- Without crying? Without having to, Aggravate you?

Up the ladder: Rock on...
Down the ladder: Turquoise

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.875
Weighted score: 4.9663825
Overall Rank: 8505
Posted: October 2, 2002 4:59 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2002 4:59 AM PDT
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[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 2-Oct-02/6:59 AM | Reply
Good, I like it. It takes a couple of readings, that makes it better.
If you care(9. Hi K!
[n/a] Owner of the Sky @ 61.9.0.98 > INTRANSIT | 2-Oct-02/11:30 AM | Reply
Hi *grin* glad you like this one. Norman is a bit put off that I am asking to be haunted by past demons again. If you haven't guessed, Norman's in my head (Doh I am sure you got it, never mind). Hi back. You never did tell me your name. :o)
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.7 > Owner of the Sky | 2-Oct-02/2:48 PM | Reply
No, actually I missed that reference. I'm so used to death and loss of love writings that I got sucked into that vortex.But upon reading again I saw it and got a chuckle too. Thanks, I need those. It's worthy of a higher rating now.;)
[9] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > INTRANSIT | 3-Oct-02/4:21 PM | Reply
Sorry K, Rich's my name, truckin's the game. 3-8-3! I do need to learn what a syllable is, don't I? I think I may have off-ended P&K in my comments. Hope he's not too mad to talk to me again. I was the defensive one that time, oops! My humble apologies,sir.
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Oct-02/1:44 PM | Reply
see you're still owning the sky...fabulously indiscreet..
[n/a] Owner of the Sky @ 61.9.0.98 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 2-Oct-02/8:20 PM | Reply
"Owner of the Sky" is a song by Cynthia Alexander, I am sure it is on the net somewhere. The lyrics were just amazing and I was listening to it at the time I registered on here, so I used it. I don't presume to own the sky... at best I am an owner of a car, or a playstation, or a PC, but I don't think I'll ever own the sky. Thanks for the vote.
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