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Rock on... (Ode) by New Life Drug
In a cold atmosphere
the singer writes his words down solid.
Composed in a hot room
it becomes a fuel for chaos.
Looking up at the multicolored lights
I am chloroformed by a stranger
I jump in a whirl of sweat and laughter.
It becomes a united thrust.
In a humid box of four dark walls,
sound pounding, with no place to go but my ears.
Loud noises move this body to a beat
I am crushed in a sweet, smokey essence
it becomes a night to remember.
Outside the venue, a cold atmosphere.
I take in crisp air as I am slightly deffoned.
Composed like the words of the singer,
I become fuel for a memory.
It is then where I am connected to the voice.
It is then when I become a string for the notes.
It is then when I become a box.
An atmosphere, humming along.
The night is over.
I will come back again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.875
Weighted score: 4.9663825
Overall Rank: 8504
Posted: September 2, 2002 7:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2002 7:35 PM PDT
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