Re: I hate you too U2 by D. $ Fontera	17-Aug-05/4:13 PM
Why am I paying you to give me the willies?
Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined	17-Aug-05/4:11 PM
My first instinct was -ace. then I went and read the other comments. stupid me. I agree with <~>. I disagree with Mona Lisa and Shuush.
Re: Words by Dovina	17-Aug-05/4:04 PM
9.999 the word (word) at the start of s-2 really pisses me off. Word?
Re: a comment on Storm Damage by Caducus	17-Aug-05/3:52 PM
Not necessarily, Caducus. One does not know how badly the water will sting untill they've gathered their cojones to jump from the high dive. 10 for that alone. Love the first stanza. Thought a favorite poet of yours had passed.
Re: Written while Kayaking by Sasha	17-Aug-05/3:31 PM
I suggest, kill s-3 and s-4, save the penultimate and attach it to the bottom of s-2. Leave the end.
Re: How Angels Sleep by Dovina	17-Aug-05/3:15 PM
please drop the full stop at the end of s-2. some stanzas have a submissive beat others don't. why? I got interchangeability between man/god/angels. For some reason that works for me.
Re: a comment on Worth by Dovina	27-Jul-05/6:10 AM
Being a sex object isn't good enough for ya?
Re: Hindsight by darby pyn	26-Jul-05/6:34 AM
" I was their chocolate." Ace. I'm guessing most (95%) of all children are unplanned and then resented by their parents. There's potential here but it's gonna take work.
Re: Jennifer won the war. by darby pyn	26-Jul-05/6:29 AM
Monster.
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	25-Jul-05/9:05 PM
alllright ALRIGHT!
Re: a comment on Moving Up by jessicazee	25-Jul-05/4:40 PM
That ambiguity works for me.
Re: Worth by Dovina	25-Jul-05/4:33 PM
And it's look, rude, unbending, lusty, made me think of myself,.... but not quite.
Re: a comment on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	15-Jul-05/7:55 AM
RE #7: How many ant hills can fit on a mountain? I've seen ant hills on mountains. How many ant hills are in sand dunes? A mountain could be less Aunty, though.
Re: Lover by Dental Panic	12-Jul-05/6:34 AM
I found that O'Hara poem you recomended. I think I have problems reading some poets because they use so many references and allusions that unless one has spent their entire life reading, there's no possible way to catch up! Very frustrating this is, MMHMM? This particular poem WAS more acessible to me. I still don't know who the lady is. Would it behoove me to chase down all of the allusions? I'm taking a hiatus from writing as I have no direction, no plan to take my poetry anywhere specific. I believe without that, my efforts are useless. This is also why I've taken to not leaving comments. Take care, E-mail me if you wish.
Re: a comment on Born and Fed by Dovina	5-Jul-05/10:21 AM
gods wife.
Re: Born and Fed by Dovina	5-Jul-05/8:32 AM
D? No offense dear, I think you're trying too hard on this one, and the last. Set aside the cow thing for a while and go read G/Ws stuff. Here's the in door: Cyclical ketchup monstrosity. P.S. I see cows a lot in my travels but aint put pen to paper yet. glad you did.
Re: The And women by INTRANSIT	5-Jul-05/8:23 AM
Typo corrected. Stanzas 4,5,7 have been altered.
Re: pop by Dental Panic	5-Jul-05/8:15 AM
Three types of pop? Pop as in pop culture, as in father, and as a measure of a moment quickly passed? I stll am not getting much O'Hara. Maybe it's me.
Re: Daytime TV by jessicazee	3-Jul-05/11:24 AM
I think it's a great grouping.
Re: Yard Birds by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	24-Jun-05/2:20 PM
Funny. And excellent. And true.