on I hate you too U2 by D. $ Fontera
17 Aug 2005, 4:13 PM
Why am I paying you to give me the willies?
on The cat who would fly by nentwined
17 Aug 2005, 4:11 PM
My first instinct was -ace. then I went and read the other comments. stupid me. I agree with <~>. I disagree with Mona Lisa and Shuush.
replying on Storm Damage by Caducus
17 Aug 2005, 3:52 PM
Not necessarily, Caducus. One does not know how badly the water will sting untill they've gathered their cojones to jump from the high dive. 10 for that alone. Love the first stanza. Thought a favorite poet of yours had passed.
on Written while Kayaking by Sasha
17 Aug 2005, 3:31 PM
I suggest, kill s-3 and s-4, save the penultimate and attach it to the bottom of s-2. Leave the end.
on How Angels Sleep by Dovina
17 Aug 2005, 3:15 PM
please drop the full stop at the end of s-2. some stanzas have a submissive beat others don't. why?
I got interchangeability between man/god/angels.
For some reason that works for me.
I got interchangeability between man/god/angels.
For some reason that works for me.
on Jennifer won the war. by darby pyn
26 Jul 2005, 6:29 AM
Monster.
on Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp
25 Jul 2005, 9:05 PM
alllright ALRIGHT!
replying on Moving Up by jessicazee
25 Jul 2005, 4:40 PM
That ambiguity works for me.
replying on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove
15 Jul 2005, 7:55 AM
RE #7: How many ant hills can fit on a mountain? I've seen ant hills on mountains. How many ant hills are in sand dunes?
A mountain could be less Aunty, though.
A mountain could be less Aunty, though.
on Lover by Dental Panic
12 Jul 2005, 6:34 AM
I found that O'Hara poem you recomended. I think I have problems reading some poets because they use so many references and allusions that unless one has spent their entire life reading, there's no possible way to catch up! Very frustrating this is, MMHMM? This particular poem WAS more acessible to me. I still don't know who the lady is. Would it behoove me to chase down all of the allusions? I'm taking a hiatus from writing as I have no direction, no plan to take my poetry anywhere specific. I believe without that, my efforts are useless. This is also why I've taken to not leaving comments. Take care, E-mail me if you wish.
replying on Born and Fed by Dovina
5 Jul 2005, 10:21 AM
gods wife.
on Born and Fed by Dovina
5 Jul 2005, 8:32 AM
D? No offense dear, I think you're trying too hard on this one, and the last. Set aside the cow thing for a while and go read G/Ws stuff. Here's the in door: Cyclical ketchup monstrosity.
P.S. I see cows a lot in my travels but aint put pen to paper yet. glad you did.
P.S. I see cows a lot in my travels but aint put pen to paper yet. glad you did.
on The And women by INTRANSIT
5 Jul 2005, 8:23 AM
Typo corrected. Stanzas 4,5,7 have been altered.
on pop by Dental Panic
5 Jul 2005, 8:15 AM
Three types of pop? Pop as in pop culture, as in father, and as a measure of a moment quickly passed? I stll am not getting much O'Hara. Maybe it's me.
on Daytime TV by jessicazee
3 Jul 2005, 11:24 AM
I think it's a great grouping.
on Yard Birds by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
24 Jun 2005, 2:20 PM
Funny. And excellent. And true.