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Daytime TV (Haiku) by jessicazee I slept way too long -
I missed Ambush Makeover!
God, I hate Montel.
I hear a whistle.
The Andy Griffith Show's on!
Black and white I hope.
Oprah's a rerun,
I can't watch Texas Justice.
I have to shower.
Digital cable
is overrated, at night
it's knives, abs, pills, men.
Up the ladder:
Was it Me??
Down the ladder:
Birmingham gardens
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Posted: June 30, 2005 1:47 AM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2005 1:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2597 Comments:
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jessicazee @ 205.188.116.139
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30-Jun-05/1:48 AM
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Don't take this one too seriously. Just trying to make fun haiku.
Great, just great.
SOMEBODY: Haikus are supposed to be about nature! zodiac: You can eat it.
I would end with the "I have to shower" stanza, or possibly, just kill the last one.
Otherwise it is fairly nice.
I think it's a great grouping.
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