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Crushing Gingersnaps (beat)

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Sep 2004 · 1 comment

Small small feats the poet feet beat to strip mine thin the second hand skin and graze the green green grass again. We write the tight write and understand kicking gas cans will highball the tallest talls. Then we rip rip riff the copper and the tin against the negative chrome mela- tonin. Truck the T-Rex OUT! Ruck the simplex, tout, choke the smokestack eyes seize the wheezy skies skip the morphine drip taking the pain straight from the thighs. Tank the tank and then thank God. Crank the bank - feed the mob shift the pith -if -if kin can indeed the kinder win sight the kite and parachute loud within the tusk toothed crowd grab the grip TWIST smoke the local towns and glue the T.V. sets face down.

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[9] Dovina 3-Oct-04/11:04 AM Reply
You're getting all choppy on us, truckdriver, swerving all over the beaten path like a meverick mermaid's man in a mania. Is this a kind of second childhood? Not bad in a punk sort of way.