on she said by Bill Z Bub
17 Feb 2003, 2:34 PM
Rewrite kicks! I'd leave it at this point.
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 2:38 PM
Swap s-2 and s-4. add order to your court.
on THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton
17 Feb 2003, 2:41 PM
Duelling wheelchairs?
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
17 Feb 2003, 2:44 PM
Must....find....time...to...digest!
on Happy Kid by ThoughtfulSoul
17 Feb 2003, 2:48 PM
What is that chirping sound? And where is the source?
on HAPPY KID by Garrett S Sexton
17 Feb 2003, 2:52 PM
This will make you happy. I'm out of time!
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Feb 2003, 5:13 PM
Who are you really?
on Her bloody diamonds by Bachus
26 Feb 2003, 2:06 PM
Nice rotation. Put a Villanelle to music yet? I'm sending you a dozen ashtrays, I'm tired of seeing cigarette burns in your carpet, drapes, dog. What say? Send two dozen? Done. Later Gator.
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>
28 Feb 2003, 4:58 PM
Glad to see you back in the saddle.
Busy and active poem ya got here. Good thing they didnt dash out in front of you.
Busy and active poem ya got here. Good thing they didnt dash out in front of you.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 3:29 PM
I get conflicting feelings as to wether this was a peacful enjoyable "education" or a teen rape. sorry. clarify? whv.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 3:32 PM
Sadly, I may be breaking my dis-ease.
on I love your pink little bow by <{Baba^Yaga}>
4 Mar 2003, 3:39 PM
So much better than: DJ Hock a loogie.
on The Drunkest ever by horus8
5 Mar 2003, 5:02 PM
Why the hell not.
on Aries, the God of war by Shardik
6 Mar 2003, 4:36 PM
Tastes great-more filling!!
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2003, 4:44 PM
Are you really wanting to be that demanding at the end.
I suspect not. But I've been wrong before.
I suspect not. But I've been wrong before.
on The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus
7 Mar 2003, 4:46 PM
Maybe, Someday, Saved by zero.
on first kiss by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 5:06 PM
I rather like it as-is
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2003, 6:05 AM
It took me a while to absorb this. Blue tongue skinks can be found in the desert? for a dime? send me a gross! Quite a different childhood from mine. Fun is where you find it. A little more fill in would work. just a little.
on if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems
8 Mar 2003, 7:38 AM
Caducus is most correct. 6 for effort.
And C, A-thank you suh!
And C, A-thank you suh!