Re: she said by Bill Z Bub	17-Feb-03/2:34 PM
Rewrite kicks! I'd leave it at this point.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Feb-03/2:38 PM
Swap s-2 and s-4. add order to your court.
Re: THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton	17-Feb-03/2:41 PM
Duelling wheelchairs?
Re: the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub	17-Feb-03/2:44 PM
Must....find....time...to...digest!
Re: Happy Kid by ThoughtfulSoul	17-Feb-03/2:48 PM
What is that chirping sound? And where is the source?
Re: HAPPY KID by Garrett S Sexton	17-Feb-03/2:52 PM
This will make you happy. I'm out of time!
Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Feb-03/5:13 PM
Who are you really?
Re: Her bloody diamonds by Bachus	26-Feb-03/2:06 PM
Nice rotation. Put a Villanelle to music yet? I'm sending you a dozen ashtrays, I'm tired of seeing cigarette burns in your carpet, drapes, dog. What say? Send two dozen? Done. Later Gator.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>	28-Feb-03/4:58 PM
Glad to see you back in the saddle. Busy and active poem ya got here. Good thing they didnt dash out in front of you.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/3:29 PM
I get conflicting feelings as to wether this was a peacful enjoyable "education" or a teen rape. sorry. clarify? whv.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/3:32 PM
Sadly, I may be breaking my dis-ease.
Re: I love your pink little bow by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Mar-03/3:39 PM
So much better than: DJ Hock a loogie.
Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8	5-Mar-03/5:02 PM
Why the hell not.
Re: Aries, the God of war by Shardik	6-Mar-03/4:36 PM
Tastes great-more filling!!
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/4:44 PM
Are you really wanting to be that demanding at the end. I suspect not. But I've been wrong before.
Re: The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus	7-Mar-03/4:46 PM
Maybe, Someday, Saved by zero.
Re: first kiss by lost in america	7-Mar-03/5:06 PM
I rather like it as-is
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Mar-03/6:05 AM
It took me a while to absorb this. Blue tongue skinks can be found in the desert? for a dime? send me a gross! Quite a different childhood from mine. Fun is where you find it. A little more fill in would work. just a little.
Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems	8-Mar-03/7:38 AM
Caducus is most correct. 6 for effort. And C, A-thank you suh!
Re: The Rift by Bachus	8-Mar-03/2:01 PM
painfully aware.