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Happy Kid (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul
He always seemed like a happy kid. Never frowning always smiling and always friendly He always played baseball with the other neigborhood kids. He was a straight A student. He had a pretty girlfriend. That boy had a future, a promising one Everyone thought he was a happy kid till his parents found him hung to death and a suicide note attached to his chest.

Up the ladder: THe Missing Piece
Down the ladder: Wither Away

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10840
Posted: February 17, 2003 1:07 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 2:43 PM PST
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Comments:
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Feb-03/2:21 PM | Reply
Wow... a two chested happy kid. that's fucking racist... 11!
[7] Garrett S Sexton @ 81.135.53.216 | 17-Feb-03/2:26 PM | Reply
DID YOU KILL THE GUY?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 216.137.193.104 | 17-Feb-03/2:48 PM | Reply
What is that chirping sound? And where is the source?
[7] Garrett S Sexton @ 81.135.53.216 | 17-Feb-03/2:51 PM | Reply
not as happy,as the HAPPY KID.
[1] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.115.88 | 17-Feb-03/5:26 PM | Reply
i would rather take a cheese grater to my face than read this
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