| Re: this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni |
8-Mar-03/2:31 PM |
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ass hair. lol. that puts things in perspective doesn't it?
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| Re: venttent3 by Crakyamuni |
8-Mar-03/2:36 PM |
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venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
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| Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
8-Mar-03/2:41 PM |
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Tuesday doesn't work for you? If I move my tae-bo and my luncheon with Mao, I can push the invasion to next Wed. Is that better? good. never put off til tomorrow.....
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| Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
9-Mar-03/6:54 AM |
Like to discuss some beefs I have here. E-mail me.
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
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| Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
10-Mar-03/5:43 AM |
Ok. What Z said about the hat and line walkers were 2 of my dislikes. Your glitterati swerve to avoid, but they're overhead?
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Mar-03/3:10 PM |
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#2s intro, I liked better. I am particular to "marking them for maybe, maybe never". I am jealous. Do what you must.
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| Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig |
10-Mar-03/3:16 PM |
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S-2 L-13 delete or blend ,maybe. I assumed there was a passing of time when the cuckoos flocked. Send your dad your guts.
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| Re: Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
10-Mar-03/3:24 PM |
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Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
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| Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig |
10-Mar-03/7:46 PM |
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Drats! I do believe my speed reading from high school has become malignant.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
10-Mar-03/8:00 PM |
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I still have yet to find a superior.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Mar-03/6:38 AM |
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where can an answer be found?
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| Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~> |
11-Mar-03/7:03 AM |
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I know why sprung is there ,but is'nt it past tense? this is happening now, i gather. Your pace is slowed with commas,while hasting? You're slowing something that happens quickly,yes? that is all. compared to v-1 this works better. lighter.
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| Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
12-Mar-03/7:15 AM |
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It was so long ago, I'm unaware of the changes. Feels strong still.
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| Re: Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:26 AM |
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For a while I thought you might be giving up the rant-face. Glad you didn't. I feel sorry for her son. She seems incapable of anything of value.
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| Re: Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:31 AM |
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dreams AND nightmares. aint it da truth
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| Re: Invisible too by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:35 AM |
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Flip it he can rip it any style you want.
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12-Mar-03/7:36 AM |
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| Re: Threnody by Nanshe |
12-Mar-03/9:14 AM |
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wonderful wordings from within.
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| Re: The Courtesan by horus8 |
13-Mar-03/6:23 AM |
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