on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni
8 Mar 2003, 2:31 PM
ass hair. lol. that puts things in perspective doesn't it?
on venttent3 by Crakyamuni
8 Mar 2003, 2:36 PM
venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
8 Mar 2003, 2:41 PM
Tuesday doesn't work for you? If I move my tae-bo and my luncheon with Mao, I can push the invasion to next Wed. Is that better? good. never put off til tomorrow.....
on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
9 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
Like to discuss some beefs I have here. E-mail me.
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
10 Mar 2003, 5:43 AM
Ok. What Z said about the hat and line walkers were 2 of my dislikes. Your glitterati swerve to avoid, but they're overhead?
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
on some deleted poem
10 Mar 2003, 3:10 PM
#2s intro, I liked better. I am particular to "marking them for maybe, maybe never". I am jealous. Do what you must.
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig
10 Mar 2003, 3:16 PM
S-2 L-13 delete or blend ,maybe. I assumed there was a passing of time when the cuckoos flocked. Send your dad your guts.
on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>
10 Mar 2003, 3:24 PM
Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig
10 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
Drats! I do believe my speed reading from high school has become malignant.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
10 Mar 2003, 8:00 PM
I still have yet to find a superior.
on some deleted poem
11 Mar 2003, 6:38 AM
where can an answer be found?
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>
11 Mar 2003, 7:03 AM
I know why sprung is there ,but is'nt it past tense? this is happening now, i gather. Your pace is slowed with commas,while hasting? You're slowing something that happens quickly,yes? that is all. compared to v-1 this works better. lighter.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
12 Mar 2003, 7:15 AM
It was so long ago, I'm unaware of the changes. Feels strong still.
on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 7:26 AM
For a while I thought you might be giving up the rant-face. Glad you didn't. I feel sorry for her son. She seems incapable of anything of value.
on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 7:31 AM
dreams AND nightmares. aint it da truth
on Invisible too by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 7:35 AM
Flip it he can rip it any style you want.
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2003, 7:36 AM
natiform.
on The Courtesan by horus8
13 Mar 2003, 6:23 AM
ok.
on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2003, 7:35 AM
moving.