| Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage |
13-Mar-03/7:41 AM |
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Just for the heck of it, roll this into a villanelle. good as is.
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| Re: Charm by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Mar-03/7:44 AM |
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Something very intriguing about the v-form. I can't figure its purpose quite yet.
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| Re: sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/7:55 AM |
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iron out the telling spots. this can fly.
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| Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus |
13-Mar-03/3:11 PM |
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I believe you've outdone yourself. Have a FWOT.
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| Re: hard as a rock by <~> |
14-Mar-03/6:10 AM |
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I do blieve you've got the villanelle down pat.
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| Re: Dust by Caducus |
14-Mar-03/6:13 AM |
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I waited and it was worth the wait.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Mar-03/6:16 AM |
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log me in for the obvious.
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| Re: All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/6:46 AM |
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| Re: Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/10:29 AM |
Man. Everyones droppin the V's like a seeder on a farm.
And I haven't the cojones to try one meself. Ah well, all in due time. Pretty good for a practice run.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Mar-03/2:04 PM |
Other than your rhyme being off a smidge, A-OK to me.
I'll be visiting your archives.
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| Re: The death of Bachus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Mar-03/8:52 AM |
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| Re: My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-03/5:28 AM |
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friggin hilarious!!! let me get you a lawn chair and we'll nosh on red vines and watch eh?
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| Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger |
21-Mar-03/1:50 PM |
Swap lines 5 and 6 and merge them. You have great potential, especially starting at such a young age. If this fulfills you, and puts a smile on your face, then continue to work at it. (9) I think you're close here.
Very close.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Apr-03/8:03 AM |
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Dats what I'm talkin 'bout!
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| Re: the photobooth by Bill Z Bub |
7-Apr-03/12:08 PM |
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Someday I shall write as well as thee.. But for now, I'll just keep on truckin'.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Apr-03/12:11 PM |
Must be a scam. They take it away, then give it back 6 months later. Must be a govt. thing.
In the meantime, on coffee....
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| Re: Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
7-Apr-03/12:27 PM |
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Closer than I am to anything resembling rythm.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Apr-03/12:31 PM |
Excellent. I ran into a guy, said he inherited half a mil. He bought a car hauler,and he's driving it.
What a dumb ass.
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| Re: Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8 |
8-Apr-03/6:12 AM |
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This is the kind of thing that proves the point to my villanelle. Could be a new fave. The closing STOMPS!
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| Re: Fix it by Nanshe |
8-Apr-03/6:16 AM |
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Did we take a liberty on the style here? I know of 2. This seems altered. Excellent topic.
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