on Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage
13 Mar 2003, 7:41 AM
Just for the heck of it, roll this into a villanelle. good as is.
on Charm by OneFingerAnswer
13 Mar 2003, 7:44 AM
Something very intriguing about the v-form. I can't figure its purpose quite yet.
on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 7:55 AM
iron out the telling spots. this can fly.
on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus
13 Mar 2003, 3:11 PM
I believe you've outdone yourself. Have a FWOT.
on hard as a rock by <~>
14 Mar 2003, 6:10 AM
I do blieve you've got the villanelle down pat.
on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 6:16 AM
log me in for the obvious.
on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap
14 Mar 2003, 6:46 AM
Is this a test?
on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
14 Mar 2003, 10:29 AM
Man. Everyones droppin the V's like a seeder on a farm.
And I haven't the cojones to try one meself. Ah well, all in due time. Pretty good for a practice run.
And I haven't the cojones to try one meself. Ah well, all in due time. Pretty good for a practice run.
on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 2:04 PM
Other than your rhyme being off a smidge, A-OK to me.
I'll be visiting your archives.
I'll be visiting your archives.
on The death of Bachus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Mar 2003, 8:52 AM
(snif)
on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 5:28 AM
friggin hilarious!!! let me get you a lawn chair and we'll nosh on red vines and watch eh?
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
21 Mar 2003, 1:50 PM
Swap lines 5 and 6 and merge them. You have great potential, especially starting at such a young age. If this fulfills you, and puts a smile on your face, then continue to work at it. (9) I think you're close here.
Very close.
Very close.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 8:03 AM
Dats what I'm talkin 'bout!
on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub
7 Apr 2003, 12:08 PM
Someday I shall write as well as thee.. But for now, I'll just keep on truckin'.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 12:11 PM
Must be a scam. They take it away, then give it back 6 months later. Must be a govt. thing.
In the meantime, on coffee....
In the meantime, on coffee....
on Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}>
7 Apr 2003, 12:27 PM
Closer than I am to anything resembling rythm.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 12:31 PM
Excellent. I ran into a guy, said he inherited half a mil. He bought a car hauler,and he's driving it.
What a dumb ass.
What a dumb ass.
on Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8
8 Apr 2003, 6:12 AM
This is the kind of thing that proves the point to my villanelle. Could be a new fave. The closing STOMPS!