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Fraternity hazing the sheepdog (Free verse) by horus8 <chookie, chookie, chookie>
Here's some milk to go with your cookies.
No, Settle down, just calm the fuck down.
But Sir they're embedded in my cavity.
Should we send in the boys from the 100 and 33 and a .25?
NOOOOOO! GOOD GOD MAN, AND lose the element of
suprise!? Son I don't know who brought you up,
but the fact stands that you can't shave the
sheep dog. I forbid it. We will however let you
<chookie, chookie, chookie>
[Fraternity hazing is illegal and degrading, so don't ]
Dark iron howitzer big gun, BIG HARD STEEL TUBE
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!
and the boys all go hooray
And the sheep dog barked balder then a mascot should
The lamb stood there dead already,
but too scared to fall over yet,
Then I whispered in it's ear
and it jumped the fence of our minds
so we all slept like baby baby babies
and cried a little too.
Thee end.
Up the ladder:
Bloodsucker
Down the ladder:
The Other Side Of Never
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.8461537
Posted: April 7, 2003 11:19 PM PDT; Last modified: April 7, 2003 11:19 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.618588 Overall Rank: 2223 Comments:
This is the kind of thing that proves the point to my villanelle. Could be a new fave. The closing STOMPS!
You just never stop writing, do you? Do you think that constant, unchecked writing is a sign of a) immense creativity b) a wild, untamed spirit c) being full to bursting with fresh, challenging ideas?
(I love it when he starts a b cing don't you?) I haven't had a new idea in about 8 months. And the ones from 8 months ago were really just recycled from a year before that. And they were mostly stolen from TV.
Knowing they were RIGHT, for god and country?
And large-breasted american women? And piss beer? Have a 9 for creative knotting.
welding
nice. hoop. la.
CHURN BABY CHURN
IT'S A HAM EXTRAVAGANZA
I hear the words on the streets to descibe this is LOL ?
Well I'm astonished I never understood the lingo, a hearty hoo haa indeed.
like the lamb stood dead line
perversely fun imagery excellent
spookie, chookie....under a haze.
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By the way, it's = it is. It's = the one belonging to it. (last stanza)
Can you point me towards some of your more meaningful poems? I rather enjoy those.
LOL TO THE MAX