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The Other Side Of Never (Ode) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Black ground sand and volcano That terrible sky looms above me Red ochre and painted albinos & not a tree for the Sea to see. Magenta and birds by the score Flying away from the shadows Out of the God head blood pours Magma in jutting crescendos. Gulls solid gray cry to wind As the Island, my prison, sinks Off the cliffs I relinquish my sin Death to the last of your links. No shooting stars, or Borealis The night is an inky void casted Beach has a swell full of madness If only that sunset had lasted.

Down the ladder: our morning bed

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8461537
Weighted score: 5.618588
Overall Rank: 2224
Posted: May 18, 2004 7:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 7:49 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 18-May-04/7:50 PM | Reply
Please don't go Sasha? You'll make us cry.
[10] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 18-May-04/8:57 PM | Reply
I'm not going anywhere.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 > Sasha | 18-May-04/9:01 PM | Reply
Did you take your poem back to the garage and put some new wheels on it darling?
[8] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 19-May-04/5:02 AM | Reply
Judith Chalmers
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 > Stephen Robins | 19-May-04/10:46 AM | Reply
Should that ring a bell?
[0] deleted user @ 172.163.82.168 | 16-Sep-04/12:02 AM | Reply
Missed again!
[0] Doug @ 172.163.82.168 | 16-Sep-04/12:13 AM | Reply
Jeremy,quit voting on your own "poems". -triple zero-
[0] klosterfobik @ 152.163.100.195 | 18-Sep-04/8:03 PM | Reply
shit
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