poemranker ::The Other Side Of Never by <{Baba^Yaga}>

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Ode № 102522

The Other Side Of Never

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 May 2004 · 8 comments

Black ground sand and volcano That terrible sky looms above me Red ochre and painted albinos & not a tree for the Sea to see. Magenta and birds by the score Flying away from the shadows Out of the God head blood pours Magma in jutting crescendos. Gulls solid gray cry to wind As the Island, my prison, sinks Off the cliffs I relinquish my sin Death to the last of your links. No shooting stars, or Borealis The night is an inky void casted Beach has a swell full of madness If only that sunset had lasted.

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8 comments

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-May-04/7:50 PM Reply
Please don't go Sasha? You'll make us cry.
[10] Sasha › <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-May-04/8:57 PM Reply
I'm not going anywhere.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Sasha 18-May-04/9:01 PM Reply
Did you take your poem back to the garage and put some new wheels on it darling?
[8] Stephen Robins 19-May-04/5:02 AM Reply
Judith Chalmers
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Stephen Robins 19-May-04/10:46 AM Reply
Should that ring a bell?
[0] deleted user 16-Sep-04/12:02 AM Reply
Missed again!
[0] Doug 16-Sep-04/12:13 AM Reply
Jeremy,quit voting on your own "poems". -triple zero-
[0] klosterfobik 18-Sep-04/8:03 PM Reply
shit