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The Other Side Of Never (Ode) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Black ground sand and volcano
That terrible sky looms above me
Red ochre and painted albinos
& not a tree for the Sea to see.
Magenta and birds by the score
Flying away from the shadows
Out of the God head blood pours
Magma in jutting crescendos.
Gulls solid gray cry to wind
As the Island, my prison, sinks
Off the cliffs I relinquish my sin
Death to the last of your links.
No shooting stars, or Borealis
The night is an inky void casted
Beach has a swell full of madness
If only that sunset had lasted.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8461537
Weighted score: 5.618588
Overall Rank: 2224
Posted: May 18, 2004 7:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 7:49 PM PDT
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