on Child Shaped Adult by http://mulberryfairy
1 Sep 2005, 7:17 PM
OOOOOH!!! and the sub-poem too! wow.
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2005, 7:26 PM
jsp-id 31428.
on Urbane Jane by MacFrantic
1 Sep 2005, 7:38 PM
it's a keeper.
on Baudelaire: The Albatross by Sasha
2 Sep 2005, 12:22 PM
I have a chapbook of Baudelaire, Some poems from Le Fleurs Du Mal. Already translated of course. Honestly, whenever I make a comment on your poems, I feel like a dope. Completely unknowledgable. Useless. I hate that. I really do.
on The Absense of God by Bluemonkey
2 Sep 2005, 12:27 PM
Flight 2252, 757 heavy. You are cleared for take-off runway two-seven left.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2005, 8:04 AM
Fired. cute.
on Cinder Mint Disaster Garden by MacFrantic
3 Sep 2005, 8:16 AM
I saw mental patients in a garden. I'm not kidding.
on First Love by Dovina
2 Sep 2005, 12:16 PM
Deeeeeeeee! please go for the beat and not the look.
....I wasn't winter-broken, though,
I thought that it would stay.
I hate using extra words too but the first three lines
hopscotch nicely.
....I wasn't winter-broken, though,
I thought that it would stay.
I hate using extra words too but the first three lines
hopscotch nicely.
on Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac
6 Sep 2005, 5:48 AM
HELP! Excelsior is wood shavings?! Can't be. Makes no sense. Dic.com left me cold. ??????? It is better as one whole piece.
on Stop stalking me, eventually by T. Jonathron Remp
6 Sep 2005, 10:06 AM
I f t h e d a m n e d s t an z a s d i d n ' t a l l s a y t h e s a m e t h i n g . . . . . . . basically.
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2005, 10:26 AM
Operative word: well as in- well for water. Put him in the well. tell us about his terrible scratchings to get out, how the well crumbles above him, how you want to rescue him in the "bucket of your love". Okay thats corny. But the metaphor would make a better poem.
on untitled Rubiyat 1 by starkfister
20 Sep 2005, 2:10 PM
well, at least you have a blog!
Moose.
Moose.
on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8
18 Sep 2005, 10:46 AM
Bought your book! Went to freakin St Joseph MO to get it too. It was worth it to take the time to read instead of rushing through. My new fave? Wigging out!
Love it when justice gets served up hot from mattress dancing! I laughed so hard I had to put the book down.
When's the next one due?
Love it when justice gets served up hot from mattress dancing! I laughed so hard I had to put the book down.
When's the next one due?
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2005, 6:45 AM
I see i will need to invest in a book of poetry references i.e. the white butterflies. Early prep for Halloween poems?
I'm reading an anthology right now: Staying alive (real poems for unreal times) By Neil Astley. I remember a poem that made mention of black holes or a black hole and your poetry came to mind. I cant seem to find the poem but the whole anthology is reeeeeely good.
Um, mamm-outh? and gladfly/glowfly? Planet-fly or moon-fly could be used? don't know. 8
Um, mamm-outh? and gladfly/glowfly? Planet-fly or moon-fly could be used? don't know. 8
on Elmer's Last Try by Dovina
21 Sep 2005, 8:04 PM
Sad. Interesting swap there. Unlike me and my heavily cliched (and sedated) poems. I think I should like to try an inversion someday. How much does the safety equipment cost? Man, the rankers dead lately!
on Gnarly Knees by Dovina
9 Oct 2005, 6:14 AM
With knees like those, you will attract a handsome and rugged man and have many a great out-of-doors "adventures".