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The Absense of God (Haiku) by Bluemonkey Good Christians on the Sabbath.
Riot, rape and death;
God left Louisiana.
Up the ladder:
Is Dying Ugly?
Down the ladder:
How does it feel?
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Posted: September 2, 2005 7:04 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2005 7:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.686235 Overall Rank: 12101 Comments:
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T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185
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2-Sep-05/7:40 AM
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Not deep enough to be a repudiation of omnipresence; just deep enough to be flooded, gutted, and razed.
Yeah...it needs more...far more.
I feel you dog, but keep working on this one.
Flight 2252, 757 heavy. You are cleared for take-off runway two-seven left.
Where'd he go?
Also, not a haiku.
Yeah well there are hardly any Christians where I live, and we haven't been pulped by any McHurricaines. It's like all those Muslim fundamentalists who believe the Tsunami was a message from God telling the Indonesians not to adopt Western customs, but to remain fully scarfed-up. Of course the message would have been rather more potent had the Tsunami struck the shores of California, where Nudity runs wide-rife, and where a Gentleman cannot walk Five Paces without brushing up against a Gay.
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