| Re: Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
24-Aug-05/3:19 PM |
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| Re: Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
24-Aug-05/3:28 PM |
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Who cares what he thinks anyway. I say, Cork Pumps and a pair of daisy dukes should do the trick!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-05/5:26 PM |
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Sometimes it's what we don't know that makes a poem work.
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| Re: With You at an Ancient Temple by Sasha |
25-Aug-05/8:56 AM |
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I read this several times to be sure I got the most out of it. Thank you for your time, Sasha.
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| Re: Apollinaire: Mirabeau Bridge by Sasha |
26-Aug-05/6:16 AM |
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I just went back and read Zodiacs- Come away with me Carly- and it seemed to echo the sound/rhythm of a villanelle. So does this, to me. Am I right? Or do I need therapy? :/
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| Re: The Moment of Over by Bethy |
28-Aug-05/7:59 AM |
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Um, aside from the hiccups in the beat ,it works.
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| Re: Shoestring Salutation by MacFrantic |
28-Aug-05/8:01 AM |
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| Re: Out of a White Hole by ALChemy |
29-Aug-05/5:51 AM |
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Ha! Universe inside the mind ! Love it !
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30-Aug-05/5:46 AM |
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30-Aug-05/5:54 AM |
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
30-Aug-05/11:42 AM |
A) Points for "groovy"
B) not "naughty bits" instead "bubbies"
C) Nice switch at the end
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| Re: Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp |
30-Aug-05/11:44 AM |
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30-Aug-05/11:49 AM |
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So, how is that big white Wookie of a father of yours? Aint seen'im around lately.
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| Re: Katrina by jessicazee |
31-Aug-05/6:17 AM |
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I like the first and second stanzas. 3 needs its lines shuffled and delete the -the- in the fourth, this will connect the two. take a rasp to the english and the end seems to be dangling, unfinished, as if suddenly washed away. ees goot.
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| Re: Summer Song by wilco |
31-Aug-05/6:21 AM |
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Snoop out the pimply parts and it'll roll.
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| Re: Intrusion by Sasha |
31-Aug-05/8:18 AM |
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I can't compete with this. But I'll try.
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
31-Aug-05/8:19 AM |
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spelling or comma in the last line.
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
31-Aug-05/8:20 AM |
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| Re: Falling by D. $ Fontera |
1-Sep-05/8:55 AM |
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Quit -the- din, i think would be better. Otherwise, I hope to see this in the top twenty soon.
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| Re: Child Shaped Adult by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-05/7:16 PM |
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Good to see you're still at it! I miss god's wife. Don't you? This is really great, I love it.
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