on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina
24 Aug 2005, 3:19 PM
Yes this makes me happy.
on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina
24 Aug 2005, 3:28 PM
Who cares what he thinks anyway. I say, Cork Pumps and a pair of daisy dukes should do the trick!
on With You at an Ancient Temple by Sasha
25 Aug 2005, 8:56 AM
I read this several times to be sure I got the most out of it. Thank you for your time, Sasha.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2005, 5:26 PM
Sometimes it's what we don't know that makes a poem work.
on Apollinaire: Mirabeau Bridge by Sasha
26 Aug 2005, 6:16 AM
I just went back and read Zodiacs- Come away with me Carly- and it seemed to echo the sound/rhythm of a villanelle. So does this, to me. Am I right? Or do I need therapy? :/
on The Moment of Over by Bethy
28 Aug 2005, 7:59 AM
Um, aside from the hiccups in the beat ,it works.
on Shoestring Salutation by MacFrantic
28 Aug 2005, 8:01 AM
hallway sex.
on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy
29 Aug 2005, 5:51 AM
Ha! Universe inside the mind ! Love it !
on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy
30 Aug 2005, 11:42 AM
A) Points for "groovy"
B) not "naughty bits" instead "bubbies"
C) Nice switch at the end
B) not "naughty bits" instead "bubbies"
C) Nice switch at the end
on Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp
30 Aug 2005, 11:44 AM
you nut.
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2005, 11:49 AM
So, how is that big white Wookie of a father of yours? Aint seen'im around lately.
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2005, 5:46 AM
This one I like.
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2005, 5:54 AM
Pair of ducks, sickly.
on Katrina by jessicazee
31 Aug 2005, 6:17 AM
I like the first and second stanzas. 3 needs its lines shuffled and delete the -the- in the fourth, this will connect the two. take a rasp to the english and the end seems to be dangling, unfinished, as if suddenly washed away. ees goot.
on Summer Song by wilco
31 Aug 2005, 6:21 AM
Snoop out the pimply parts and it'll roll.
on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy
31 Aug 2005, 8:19 AM
spelling or comma in the last line.
on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy
31 Aug 2005, 8:20 AM
what the?
on Falling by D. $ Fontera
1 Sep 2005, 8:55 AM
Quit -the- din, i think would be better. Otherwise, I hope to see this in the top twenty soon.
on Child Shaped Adult by http://mulberryfairy
1 Sep 2005, 7:16 PM
Good to see you're still at it! I miss god's wife. Don't you? This is really great, I love it.