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Shoestring Salutation (Free verse) by MacFrantic
I am off and over you
Leaving this moment saturated
A heavy creamer of guilt
Guzzled down into easy consumption
I can say hello as I'm leaving
Not think twice about protocol
To meet the person I thought I never knew
An angel with a moral grudge
Slight patches of chaos scatter me
A thousand droplets of anguish
Scoured moonlight dancing on my fingers
I toxify the air with regret
But going and coming are mutual
They pass over a common threshold
One choice-riddled entry way
Often hastily passed through too soon
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4487
Posted: August 27, 2005 2:46 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2005 2:46 PM PDT
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