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Shoestring Salutation (Free verse) by MacFrantic
I am off and over you Leaving this moment saturated A heavy creamer of guilt Guzzled down into easy consumption I can say hello as I'm leaving Not think twice about protocol To meet the person I thought I never knew An angel with a moral grudge Slight patches of chaos scatter me A thousand droplets of anguish Scoured moonlight dancing on my fingers I toxify the air with regret But going and coming are mutual They pass over a common threshold One choice-riddled entry way Often hastily passed through too soon

Up the ladder: My Angel
Down the ladder: Catapults

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4487
Posted: August 27, 2005 2:46 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2005 2:46 PM PDT
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[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.67 | 28-Aug-05/8:01 AM | Reply
hallway sex.
[9] LilMsLadyPoet @ 205.188.116.69 | 28-Aug-05/8:03 PM | Reply
hmmm...nice!
[9] LilMsLadyPoet @ 205.188.116.69 | 28-Aug-05/8:04 PM | Reply
I mean the poem...nice! (As for hallway sex, guess that depends on with whom!)
[8] Heather Dee @ 63.17.24.26 | 6-Sep-05/2:48 AM | Reply
Good a little differnt but I think I get were you are going with this one
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