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The Awakening (Free verse) by Leah11
The stench of deception An inconceivable act of disgrace I ponder why they will always be seduced by the destruction of the soul Why chase emptyness When there can be fulfillment When one can see the truth in the darkness In bewilderment I wait for the light to chase the shadows And a time and a place where all will be true

Up the ladder: Snake in the Grass
Down the ladder: Shoestring Salutation

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4489
Posted: September 2, 2004 8:33 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 8:33 AM PDT
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[10] sliver @ 63.190.80.10 | 4-Sep-04/11:22 AM | Reply
Now is the time, this is the place. Welcome.
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