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The Awakening

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Sep 2004 · 1 comment

The stench of deception An inconceivable act of disgrace I ponder why they will always be seduced by the destruction of the soul Why chase emptyness When there can be fulfillment When one can see the truth in the darkness In bewilderment I wait for the light to chase the shadows And a time and a place where all will be true

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[10] sliver 4-Sep-04/11:22 AM Reply
Now is the time, this is the place. Welcome.