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Intrusion (Sonnet) by Sasha
I saw a bold red cardinal, quick and slight
As the last spark out of an erstwhile fire,
Dart from his dead and native tree for flight,
Dodging the deadly voltage of a wire
To heights that let a birdâs eye view the road
Wrapped tight as a huge boa round his wood
In which a dark, continual winter showed
On a few boughs where greener summer should.
Onward I wandered down the well-paved track
With faltering limbs, not knowing why, and soon
The forestland had a sameness of black
And a slow growing thirst had parched me weak.
I tripped and saw, with paper and glass bestrewn,
The former river creep as a low creek.
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Weighted score: 5.6051183
Overall Rank: 2288
Posted: August 30, 2005 8:30 PM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2005 8:30 PM PDT
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