on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2005, 4:00 PM
HA! Loved it.
on The cat who would fly by nentwined
17 Aug 2005, 4:11 PM
My first instinct was -ace. then I went and read the other comments. stupid me. I agree with <~>. I disagree with Mona Lisa and Shuush.
on I hate you too U2 by D. $ Fontera
17 Aug 2005, 4:13 PM
Why am I paying you to give me the willies?
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2005, 6:14 AM
Let it ride, cupcake.
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2005, 6:35 AM
And then add a "dispose of after" date and we'd have a cure for overpopulation. Um, I don't know, Dan. I smell a tit of sarcasm but I can't bring myself to liking it.
on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy
19 Aug 2005, 7:37 AM
Aside from the rogue period at the end of the Unsheathed line, it sounds good to go.
on Playing The Vibes by impert&ent
19 Aug 2005, 7:48 AM
it's resonating in my subconcious, but that is all at the moment.
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2005, 3:34 PM
Technically, 20's are the diameter of the INSIDE of the tire lip that seals the tire to the wheel. Of course this also gives no regard to the tires' width or it's aspect ratio. You might be "rollin' on 18 and 1/2s"! I can't be sure without more information. And a tape measure.
on Salvatore Quasimodo: Agrigentum Road by Sasha
21 Aug 2005, 9:21 AM
In order to understand poetry more , may I ask: What is the purpose of translating a poem which has been translated probably more than once? In the meantime, it pleases my ears and thanks for introducing me to ANOTHER poet whom I shall probaly never understand were it not for translations. Voting in this case seems futile without being able to read Italian. 10
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2005, 9:06 AM
I have never seen a Verlaine. And I almost didn't post because of the quality of this piece. I agree with Shuush.Only more quality can help us all out of the swamp.
on American Semele (Edit) by Sasha
21 Aug 2005, 10:48 AM
Something's wrong in the last stanza. i'm no grammmarian but it just doesn't make sense to me. Sorry I can't help more than that.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2005, 10:06 AM
Tribbles and squids? I'm not sure that's a good Idea. This is fun , except when it starts to go rapp-y.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2005, 6:11 AM
Thiss starts with a good beat and then blasts through the guardrail and goes sailing into the trees. But you have said you're not a fan of music in poetry so I can't help you, which sucks.
on Leaving the Woods House by zodiac
23 Aug 2005, 5:54 AM
This suggests I tried too hard on that last and only sonnet of mine. Fine by me.
on Letter from Palermo by Caducus
23 Aug 2005, 6:08 AM
Jeez, Cad. Why do I get the feeling that Giuseppe and Grand Papa are different men?
Good morning? Good evening?
Good morning? Good evening?
on The Big Stupid Dink :) :) by Bethy
23 Aug 2005, 1:51 PM
mostly normal stuff. Stealing Dr. Hook is worth goin' after him for.
on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina
24 Aug 2005, 2:58 PM
A bunch of no-nos. By that I mean you can just lose the beginning nos', the changes of mind.